I'm planning to return to finish off a story I wrote 2006-2007, DiamondStar IV - an SF NC mostly F/F story that was well rated but wasn't quite going the direction I wanted. Before extending it, I'd like to do a chapter by chapter rewrite, correcting various issues, adding some more to scenes and cutting out anything that doesn't really work, and most of all adding a theme that's critical to the end of the story but never really got worked in on the initial write. If anyone is willing to take a look over the story, I'd appreciate hearing what works, what doesn't, and what people would like to see.

Thanks much!