I am in the process of writing my first storym as I read through it I realize how bad my grammer is, so basically what I am looking for is someone who might be willing to proofread it for me, the only thing you will recieve in return is my unending gratitude and the chance to be the first person to read the saga Jacqui's Torment.
If you are interested either send me email dr_midnite@hotmail.com or reply here,
Thanks

Be forwarned this is a very hardcore story, it includes rape, torture, beastieality, fisting, maybe some racism, modification, lot the bondage, and lots of pain. The story is mostly male dominant female slave's. It that doesn't scare you off let me know if you be willing to help.