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    I liked it too and Venom has done a terrific job with his critique. I too think that in this case it isn't scat play. I've written such stuff too and never used the 'scat-tag'.
    Quote Originally Posted by Saridu View Post
    Well it's not serious, my understanding is this is reserved for actual BDSM practices and realistic situations - I write fantasy ;-)
    Looking at about 90% of the stories on the library, I very much hope that they are fantasies, too

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    Quote Originally Posted by lucy View Post
    I liked it too and Venom has done a terrific job with his critique. I too think that in this case it isn't scat play. I've written such stuff too and never used the 'scat-tag'.
    Looking at about 90% of the stories on the library, I very much hope that they are fantasies, too
    Trust me. When my stories get past basic restraints and erotic bondage, it is all fiction vs. reality.

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    Quote Originally Posted by lucy View Post
    Looking at about 90% of the stories on the library, I very much hope that they are fantasies, too
    Touche, what I meant was that I write in a fantasy setting (magic, wizards, witches etc) so my writing cannot be considered set in a realistic situation. Even my actual sex scenes require a little suspension of belief (Part A rarely fits as easily in Slot B as I describe and few woman, I'm sure could enjoy anal sex as much as my protagonists :P )

    Thanks Venom for the critique, I'm an amateur so I usually write first pass and I'm too much in a rush to write the next scene (My muse is one demanding mistress) to consider my grammar. Yes I now notice how I tend to double full stop after speech in sentences, something I will have to look out for ;-)

    So serious it is without scat. Thank you once again for the feedback, I will hopefully start posting tonight.

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