lol vampyres, it is amazing what you find and read when you go back over your older poetry and how closely related it can be to what you know and desire now The subconscious speaking through verse? I believe it.

I like this poem as it relays the struggle inside, it has great imagery and holds this strong...would you want a suggestion?

I do not wish to overstep and am in no way a professional nor better, but to add somethings I was taught that you might like or not and go from there...and I hope you would perchance do the same for my poetry also if you wish.