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Give and you'll be given
Author: lits
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(Added on Oct 8, 2008)
(This month 39504 readers) (Total 42657 readers) |
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A woman is displayed and played with while blindfolded and tied. She does her best to pay back the guys who treated her so nicely and finally gets rewarded by her master. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 6, 2009 |
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skp2bear poses him/herself too many questions. I found the story to fit perfect as seen from the submissive's point of view. To her, it doesn't matter where the other people came from, nor where they went, as everything that happens is according to her master's wishes.
As a consequence, it shouldn't matter to us either.
Good, well-written short.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lillyrose123
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Oct 11, 2008 |
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Great story... Enjoyed it very much.. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
skp2bear
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Oct 10, 2008 |
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Who were the others and where did they go? Was this a fantasy one of the two maincharacters had. You show a lot of promise. Your grammar needs cleaning up. In this area I volunteer to help through the offer of proofreading. You can reach me through the site. (6/10)
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