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The Vacation
Author: Jackpot
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(Added on Oct 24, 2001)
(This month 73654 readers) (Total 128716 readers) |
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A woman on a vacation is slowly tranformed into a white slave. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 21, 2009 |
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Like the rating says: Good, was worth reading...
JJ (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 14, 2004 |
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great story, can't wait to read more chapters. hope there is much more to cum, loved the progression of the story (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ron8nl
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Aug 15, 2003 |
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Inconsistent writing, but great story, just what i like. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Jul 18, 2003 |
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There is a bit too much going on here and it moves very quickly and some of the grammar is not as sharp as the authors other works but I have to admit that it turned me on big time. Maybe I have a dwarf fetish and that Madame Cong, she could seduce anyone. It is lights out when she get control of your mind! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jonathan
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Oct 27, 2001 |
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Sperm juice? (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
engineer
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Oct 27, 2001 |
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A good basic storyline with several nice ideas, but overstuffed with too much content pressed in too few text. The story appears a little bit hectic. It would have needed more exhaustiveness, and the end ist too sudden. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
kaleun
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Oct 25, 2001 |
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not bad. The finger torture is original (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
ownedgirl
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Oct 24, 2001 |
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Nothing new here. Weak sentence structure, even weaker storyline, no real creativity and characters as boring and ' vanilla ' as you can get. Still, if it's a cold rainy night, it can be read without being completely turned off. (5/10)
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trusser
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Oct 24, 2001 |
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Good reading from purian standpoint interesting story line if not a little far fetched (7/10)
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