Beautifully written indeed!
We particularly liked the bit with Sylvia: we belong, you see, to the school of pornographic theory - pertaining to texts as well as to art - which holds that that the number of participants -- active or pasive -- people musst be odd. Thus one is OK (for a while) and you terat that beautifully (the several lovely masturbation bits), three is great (hence Sylvia), five requires some mastery (which you certainly seem to have), and with seven ... we don't know. The Divine Marquis could pull off seven, but then he was a genius, wasn't he?
In Part Two, will there be a party?
With much admiration,
Erika von KZ