Chapter 9 is up, and from the review and the e-mail I've received, it's been a hit. I've done a lot of planning for the storyline of Julie, and now that I've worked out some things, I can continue working on Chapter 11.

@ Aurelis, that WordWeb program has been most helpful Thanks for the link. I don't know how I lived without it.

I've been reading through the Tawny Man series, and noted a few things about the writing in it. The author uses a lot of short sentences, rather than putting in a comma and wording it differently. Microsoft Word would have a fit with all the "fragment - consider revising" grammar errors It doesn't interfere with the storytelling however, and I'm quite enjoying the book.