Originally posted by woodsman'sgame
If you will send me the original story and translation, I'll be glad to proofread them both for you.
I'm a professional translator (English/Spanish) but this will be an interesting change of pace from my usual translating work.
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! I've sent both versions of the story to the email you gave me on your private message.

I've also submitted the original Spanish version of the story to the site, surely it will popup on the next update.

Thanks for your advice to all of you! And please, those who speak Spanish, let me know what you think of the story. And those who doesn't, let me know about the English version

Regards