Thanks everwilling, e e norcod, slavelucy and boccaccio for your feedback.

I am pleased to note that Jinn has posted Part Two "The Seven Mortal Sins" and provided them in a special "word.doc" format so that they can be seen in their original format ...

As mentioned, these are an "experimental" form. I want to push the envelope of my skills as a story teller - adhering to a restrictive form is one way to develop this.

My goal with these pieces is to evoke an emotional reaction from the reader: laughter, horror, disgust, identification with the situation ... hence, in part, the need for feedback.