By way of background, I tested the "snippets" with several friends before posting ... people whose opinions and advice I respect and take to heart. So I was surprised that there was no reaction at first.

Negative comments are very valuable, because that's how I can improve the craft. I approach writing this way: 80% of what I do is crap and should be changed or discarded. 15% is okay but needs work. The remaning 5% is fine just as it is ... which means it definitely should be discarded.

The Snippets are first draft pieces for the most part. I set myself a challenge: one page stories based on a single theme. The first set: an artist. The second set: the seven mortal sins.
I am planning a third set: the elements.

I really am looking for people to tell me what they think - that is one of the driving forces behind my creativity. Like any performer, I cannot live without the audience ...

Thanks for the kudos.

Now, what was it you DIDN'T like about the snippets?