I would not mind reading your story. As a matter of fact, I am rather sure I would enjoy it. You can send it to me at payton_naomi_kaili@yahoo.com. I will try to be as helpful as I can and I am not one of those reviewer's who, shall we say shows very littleetiqiette and even less home training.
Still crazy and proud of it !
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Hi all,

I hope this is the right forum for this, but I'd like someone to proof-read a story I have just written before I submit it to the BDSM library. Despite my moniker, I am a fairly poor writer (I warn you now), but in the spirit of practice making perfect, I have written another story.

It contains a great deal of sex, some M/f(+) and F/m domination, and probably not enough characterisation. But if anyone is willing to read it and make constructive suggestions (naturally I'm not about to rewrite the whole story, but I am happy to take any and all suggestions on board) to help me out, I would be most grateful. It's about 10,000 words, and it's a 100kb PDF that I can e-mail to anyone who is willing to assist.

Thanks in advance!