Quote Originally Posted by somewriter
Hi all,

I hope this is the right forum for this, but I'd like someone to proof-read a story I have just written before I submit it to the BDSM library. Despite my moniker, I am a fairly poor writer (I warn you now), but in the spirit of practice making perfect, I have written another story.

It contains a great deal of sex, some M/f(+) and F/m domination, and probably not enough characterisation. But if anyone is willing to read it and make constructive suggestions (naturally I'm not about to rewrite the whole story, but I am happy to take any and all suggestions on board) to help me out, I would be most grateful. It's about 10,000 words, and it's a 100kb PDF that I can e-mail to anyone who is willing to assist.

Thanks in advance!

Hi, I will gladly read it for you. I write myself but only for friends and they seem to think i have an eye for these things. You can send it to me at sean_daughton@hotmail.com. I'll give you an honest opinion and any advice I think may help!
SEAN