Thanks for the good wishes, sorry to disappoint!

I think I can keep the first 6 chapters posted here, since it's a private forum for members only.

I am getting complaints from the publisher (and some experienced reviewers) that some parts of these chapters are repetitive and/or boring. In some cases I've fixed it, but I'm afraid in others I don't see it. (Too close to it perhaps)

If anyone is able to help me find repetitive or boring passages in the first chapters posted here, I'll be very grateful!

I will express my gratitude by offering individual copies of the corrected story as they become available.