Quote Originally Posted by Maliia
I'm kind of new here as you can see so what's the best way to get a couple of objective people to read and give good feedback and thoughts. I don't really have a title for the story yet but its about a friendship between two Chinese twin sisters and their Hawaiian/Japanese friend. I've finished writing all the setup stuff so I think things will start to get sexy and exciting and fetishy starting with the next chapter, but if everything really sucks, what's the point right?
I'm always interested in helping people develop their writing styles. I write professionally (legal, not fiction) and dabble in erotic stories for a creative release. How much "COMES NOW the Party of the First Part to file Claim against Party of the Second Part" can one guy take! :yuck:


I've submitted a few stories to BDSMLibrary recently as my first foray into public viewing. I have a story in development, too. Maybe we can exchange ideas. I'll critique yours if you'll critique mine! Email skullchaser@yahoo.com