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Cool! I hope you'll read and review my stuff. I currently have two stories here - the latest was just posted. It's called "Learning", and is currently the third story listed on the front page. "Learning" is an ongoing series - the first three chapters are available. This is also a rewrite of a lost series, which I had gotten up to about 11 chapters.

The other story here was posted back in January, and is called "Teachin' Them Girls a Lesson". A hillbilly-stereotype spanking/incest story that was written more for laughs than anything else.

I also just submitted three of my one-shot short stories, which I'm pretty proud of. They should be posted with the next site update.

One is called "Serendipitous" - it was more of an attempt at a particular literary technique than anything else, but turned out quite erotic (I think so anyway)

The second is called "Winter". Most of my stories are written in the 3rd-person, but more from the bottom/sub/victim's perspective. This was my first attempt at a first-person narrative, with the bottom as narrator. The setting is just a 15YO girl staring out the window watching snow fall and reminiscing about a couple spankings her father had given her. I tried hard to actually sound like a 15YO girl, but don't know how successful I was. The whole thing takes place inside the girl's head.

The third story, "The House In the Woods" didn't turn out anything like I planned. I got the idea to write a spanking ghost story, and I turned the idea over in my head for a couple months figuring out how I wanted it to go. I wanted to have a vengeful ghost, who was the spectre of a middle-aged man who had been killed by a mob after being falsely accused of raping a young teenaged girl. The ghost was going to snatch any teenaged girl who wandered near his house, and severely and brutally punish and rape her in retaliation for the false accusations of the original girl. One girl, however, was going to keep coming back for more. The ghost would then use her to lure other unsuspecting victims.

Well, I started writing, and that whole plot pretty much went out the window. The middle-aged ghost turned into the ghost of a 21YO Mexican man. He had still been killed by a mob, but the circumstances were completely different. The story ended up becoming a very sad love story. It made most of the women who read it cry ;-)