Originally posted by Tractortorture
I mean as in geting away from just following sterotypes. There seems to be a generic American Teenage character which seems to be everywhere at present, from stories on this site, to TV programs like Buffy, Smallville & all those teen 'comedies'. And to be honest I'm more a Angel than Buffy man.
Hmmm... I don't watch television, so I'm kinda unfamiliar with these stereotypes ;-) I hope I don't write my girl characters like that. Most of mine tend to come out as natural-born-victim types. I don't really go for the "All-American Girl" thing - instead, I like the demure, Plain Jane type of girl.


I've just finished the first chapter of a series called "The Mansion" (not posted here yet). It's actually a rewrite of a story that I'd gotten quite far with and then lost in a hard drive accident. The setting is a sort of "gentlemen's club" where all of the slaves are teenaged girls. The first chapter describes the "initiation" gang-rape of a 14YO girl - a runaway who has been lured with promises of becoming a fashion model.

Because the owner of the club keeps his slaves until they turn 19, he has strict policies in place to regulate how the slaves are treated so that they're not completely worn out and used up at the end of their term of service. [One reason: if a client grows fond of a particular slave, he may purchase her when she turns 19.] So the initiation gang rape is relatively "gentle". These policies are based on the slave's age. They include limits on what kinds of sexual activity a slave of a certain age may be used for, as well as what kinds of BDSM she may be subjected to. These limits increase and expand as the slave grows older. Examples:

A 13YO slave may only be fucked, and spanked with certain implements.

A 14YO slave adds fellatio and cunnilingus to her sexual skills, and may be spanked with more severe implements.

A 15YO slave adds breast-whipping and nipple-clamping to her punishment list.

At 16YO, a slave becomes eligible for anal sex and pussy-whipping.

Etc, etc...

And because the club owner is really a kind-hearted fellow *G*, the slaves are also trained to enjoy, even crave, all manner of sexual activity, so that within a year of their enslavement they become almost willing, consensual participants who accept the painful BDSM in exchange for pleasurable rewards. They are also provided with mandatory, accelerated education so that by their 19th birthday they have the equivalent of a high-school diploma and two years of college education.