'Just curious - what do you mean by "more personal"?'

I mean as in geting away from just following sterotypes. There seems to be a generic American Teenage character which seems to be everywhere at present, from stories on this site, to TV programs like Buffy, Smallville & all those teen 'comedies'. And to be honest I'm more a Angel than Buffy man.

I just feel that sometimes people are writing to this sterotype rather than add their own experiences & personnel tastes to there writing

Perhaps its because I'm British & the college/high school system is different here, so I tend to switch off at these types of stories. Also it may be because I'm geting older?

Also I can appreciate what you mean by a slow build up. Wrecking the pussy stories seem to be short sharp often violent stories where the pain/humiliation of the victim is quite important. While you prefer to write from the victims point of view.

I think overal what I'm saying is that if people relie more on there. own personal sexual tastes & interests & vary the characters & situations then the qualities of stories & writing would improve.

God that was more long winded than Tom Clancey!!

I'm now going to read t-luvs stories to see if there as good as his threads