Originally posted by Tractortorture
Perhaps it is more a case that some of these stories can be repetative. Maybe writers need to make the stories more personal, even if this alienates some readers?
Just curious - what do you mean by "more personal"? I've noticed that in my own writing I like to establish some kind of relationship between victim and tormenter. I also tend to write from the perspective of the "sub" or victim (always female and teenaged), with more of my own personality turning up in the submissive than in the dominant. That, in spite of my being a 30-something male. (Psychology time, there!)Maybe it's because I'm not especially aggressive or dominant in RL, and the actual fantasy for me comes out in my dominant male characters.

Maybe the reason these "wrecking" stories bother me is that I like to see things develop more gradually. Especially when the story leads the reader to believe that the victim's situation is going to continue for some time.

Perhaps that's just because my primary kink is spanking. Spanking fetishists frequently like to administer spankings that start out "low-intensity" and gradually build in severity.

Anyway, there's nothing really wrong with this kind of story. It's just that I always search for the "teen" code, and after about the fifth story that starts out with a "wreck the pussy" scene, it starts getting old. It's as if the authors didn't want to take the time to develop the scenario, choosing instead to go right for the most extreme acts.