help us with script

[le forgeron]

Dear Sirs,

Bad start! You're forgetting more than half of the population...

I think it is most right place for this asking.We with my slut wife have decided to make home porno movie (non for commercial use). I am ready to be the director and the actor, and she an actress. We want to involve one more actor.

Ok, that's fine, but beware, having more than one role can be difficult. Who is at the camera ?

Our opportunities:
-The wife really beautiful whore 32 year with very good figure and large brests

And that shouldn't care too much.

-We will find the second actor from message bords most likely he will not be the professional

So, the scenario should be enjoyable for him/her.

-Elements of violence and various perversions are acceptable
-For us possible to shoot this movie in the street, in hotel, in cafe and on a nature
Basis of a plot we would to see poker game and wife as a bet in the end she should become real dirty whore completely dependent on this cunt and mans cock. For us very important humiliation and gradual degradation.

And so, you have a 'poker party' magically transforming the wife ?

We thankful in advance and as the award to the author of the script,we can send the some photos from future home blockbuster)))

COME ON, this was supposed to be home-porno... not blockbuster!

If you want to stick to the poker party, it might be wiser to have two players, each with a separate wife... or at least the player without wife should have something significant as counter-balance.
The bet might be various performance from winner (or winner's wife) upon the looser's wife... here would pop up the unspeak humiliation.

I would certainly prefer something like a 3 player poker: Wife, A and B.
The bet would start like a classical strip-poker, but would spice up with plugs, special outfit, performance and so on. Having a nice big scale displayed to provide money to repay the debt. (so, In need of 100, let's suck everybody... Oh, you need more, sorry but the easy 100 is gone, at best you could now get your ankle spread (by a solid bar) for ... ) Get the idea ?
Shooting should alternate between sex and card display (you might want to either shoot subjectively from either Wife or A point of view, or provide a better game view to the spectator).

For punishment scale, I've always found the BSDM-checklist to be a source of idea.

Of course, as it's a movie, the card should not be really shuffled... unless you are ready to be fair and surprised by the card.