Yes, thank you. No criticism was intended, but I've been told that my style can be a little over the top, so I'm working on that. And while I've gotten a lot of positive response over the years, I need something to build from--and I've usually read my own story so many times by the time I send them anywhere, I've lost all perspective.

I caught the grammatical errors after the story was posted, and they are driving me CRAZY. It's mostly typos like "tried" instead of "dried" but still...