First of all, I'd like to thank everyone for their intelligent comments. Thanks for responding y'all! How kind.

First off, It seems a few people are overly concerned about the age I posted for the "victim" of my tale. Truth be told, I think I erred and placed the possible age a wee bit too young. I thing the lowest anyone should go in a story is 15, and the ideal age for the character in my tale is 15-16. So, I really should have said 9th or 10th grade. Oops! Me bad!

Now, I'm aware a few who posted will STILL think that is too young. Well, I just have a few questions for those individuals: what age is the appropriate to write a bdsm FANTASY tale? And what exactly makes the humiliation and abuse of a 15 year-old WRONG, while the torment of an 18 year-old is somehow "a-okay?" Answer me that, and maybe I'll bump the age up a few years.

Ya see, it seems to me a few people are having trouble grasping the concept of the word "story." That's all this little idea is, nothing more. It will NEVER happen in real life! A vast Network of rapists doesn't exist, and NEVER will! Ya see, rapists are sociopaths, and typically pathetic, weak, weasly men who probably don't have many friends, and would hardly function in a large group with a complex common goal that requires intricate planning and patience. That's what makes my story idea rather safe as far as a possible motivator for copycat psychos. 'Nuff said?

As for me personally, I never have - and NEVER WILL - harm any female. I'm involved with a gorgeous college girl who's both an athlete and an exceptional scholar. (Her 3.9 GPA blows-away the paltry 3.2 I recieved.) Curiosly enough, she's also a virgin - quite an accomplishment for a girl that's 21 in this day and age. I respect her stance regarding premarital sex and will stand by her decision It's just that every now and then I enjoy stories like those that can be found in bdsm sites. Extreme erotica is a fairly enticing turn-on for me, just so long as the writer has the literary chops to put together a good well-paced story.

Bottom line: I like my story idea, and I prefer my victims a wee bit on the the young side. If that's too extreme, well, tough cookies! I myself have problems with stories involving snuff and scat and any type of disfiguring torture. Too me, that's too extreme. Ya see, we all have our bizarre preferences when reading this sort of FICTION. Lets just keep this in mind: we're dealing with fantasy here, get it? It's not real!

Now get writing! (On my story idea, that is.)

Oh yeah, one more thing: Have a Very MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!

Sirthumper

p.s. Once again, thanks for writing such nice polite replies.