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  1. 07-13-2007 #1
    RiverOtter
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    Review me!

    This is actually a third draft, but the second version I've posted.

    The setting: The Roman Empire...in the future!! [*dum-dum-dummm* music]

    I'd like to know: Does the setting work (i.e., is it interesting) and are the characters consistent.

    Thanks in advance for useful/sincere feedabck.
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