The Becoming Review and Request

[Samir]

http://www.mcstories.com/Becoming/index.html

It's not from this site, but it is a GREAT story in my opinion. It turns me on so much...not ALL because of the sex (though there are great scenes) but it's the power that really gets me going, he can do ANYTHING to ANYONE, and they cant say shit.

*sigh* I haven't seen many stories akin to this one, and I was hoping someone could point me towards one?

[bdsmbill]

I read the story, and it is excellent. There are some good mind control stories here, as well. One of mine is called "The Inventor."