How do I get Feedback on a Story I Just Started.

[Maliia]

Hi everyone, I hope you're all feeling good. I have a story I am writing and I don't know if its good or really sucky or what. It's still in the very early part where I'm setting up the characters and stuff so there's not much sex or bondage yet and really its not even erotic or sexy yet either I think but I was hoping I could get some feedback on it so far because if it really sucks then I don't want to keep writing more of it and if its at least mediocre than maybe I can go fix the problems I have before I go on to do more.

I'm kind of new here as you can see so what's the best way to get a couple of objective people to read and give good feedback and thoughts. I don't really have a title for the story yet but its about a friendship between two Chinese twin sisters and their Hawaiian/Japanese friend. I've finished writing all the setup stuff so I think things will start to get sexy and exciting and fetishy starting with the next chapter, but if everything really sucks, what's the point right?

So anyway, if you could just let me know what I should do to get feedback, I would appreciate it. Thanks!

[somewriter]

Asking in this forum is what I went for, and I've had a couple of responses. In the good spirit of the forums, I would be happy to have a read of your story thus far and give you my opinion, for what it is worth. E-mail the story to somewriter2000 at yahoo.co.uk if you would like me to take a look.

[Chuckdom19]

I'd be more than willing to look at your story. You can email it to me at chksng19(at)yahoo(dot)com.

chksng19

[skullchaser]

I'm kind of new here as you can see so what's the best way to get a couple of objective people to read and give good feedback and thoughts. I don't really have a title for the story yet but its about a friendship between two Chinese twin sisters and their Hawaiian/Japanese friend. I've finished writing all the setup stuff so I think things will start to get sexy and exciting and fetishy starting with the next chapter, but if everything really sucks, what's the point right?

I'm always interested in helping people develop their writing styles. I write professionally (legal, not fiction) and dabble in erotic stories for a creative release. How much "COMES NOW the Party of the First Part to file Claim against Party of the Second Part" can one guy take! :yuck:


I've submitted a few stories to BDSMLibrary recently as my first foray into public viewing. I have a story in development, too. Maybe we can exchange ideas. I'll critique yours if you'll critique mine! Email skullchaser@yahoo.com

[Maliia]

Hi,

Curtis! Thanks to an email server problem that happened, I've lost your email address. UGH! Anyway, if you could email me at my email address (and if you don't have my address either you can send a message through the bdsm library at my author page) then that would be great and I would really appreciate it. Thanks hon!

luv,
Maliia