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  1. 07-01-2007 #1
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    Elusive

    Deep in the forest
    The labyrinth of my mind
    Lays peaceful existence
    Elusive to find

    Contrite the soul wanders
    In sorrow and pain
    Mistakes unforgiving
    Joy unattained

    In the breath of a whisper
    The universe turns
    Entreat the Gods’ pardon
    For words so unsure

    Desecrate not
    The grail of the collar
    For within its hallowed hollow
    Sacred peace is assured.
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  2. 07-01-2007 #2
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    Simply sublime writing thrall. You have the gift of saying so much and creating vivid imagery with an economy of words. I think I'll call it poetic efficiency.

    This and Galaxies are exquisite poems thanks for sharing them.
    Quantum physics, worm holes, string theory... it teaches us what surfers already know... to ride a wave is to be one with the universe, the creation and the creator.
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    touched me deeply...as your words tend to do...
    Be careful of wolves in sheep's clothing..not everything is as it appears to be...
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    You are just so enjoyable in so many ways.
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    "Poetic efficiency"...oh, that's a good way to say it, Sir G.

    thrall, your words have such a deep and lasting impact.

    tessa
    "Life is just a chance to grow a soul."
    ~A. Powell Davies

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    Very nice poetry.
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    all too close to my heart, it is as if you are able to portray my thoughts in your words, wonderful, awesome and beautiful, thank you Thrall
    Birds make great sky circles of their freedom
    How do they do it?
    They fall

    And in falling, they’re given wings
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