Hi everyone, I hope you're all feeling good. I have a story I am writing and I don't know if its good or really sucky or what. It's still in the very early part where I'm setting up the characters and stuff so there's not much sex or bondage yet and really its not even erotic or sexy yet either I think but I was hoping I could get some feedback on it so far because if it really sucks then I don't want to keep writing more of it and if its at least mediocre than maybe I can go fix the problems I have before I go on to do more.

I'm kind of new here as you can see so what's the best way to get a couple of objective people to read and give good feedback and thoughts. I don't really have a title for the story yet but its about a friendship between two Chinese twin sisters and their Hawaiian/Japanese friend. I've finished writing all the setup stuff so I think things will start to get sexy and exciting and fetishy starting with the next chapter, but if everything really sucks, what's the point right?

So anyway, if you could just let me know what I should do to get feedback, I would appreciate it. Thanks!