Naughty, Nasty, Numbing, Exciting, Erotic, Imaginary, Just plain HOT! In a word, Mmmmmmmmm
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Naughty, Nasty, Numbing, Exciting, Erotic, Imaginary, Just plain HOT! In a word, Mmmmmmmmm
That story is awesome, thank you. Gosh I wish someone was here to play with me................sigh
I've always been a big fan of humiliation and the whole 'innocent schoolgirl' fantasy. Especially the uniforms. I actually have a submissive who I roleplay such fanties with over instant messenger programs. Not as good as real life...but hey it still rocks! lol. Maybe I'll post a little diddy here...
Riveting-simply riveting--I was hanging on every word-oops, need to change my T-backs now...... Boy, would I like to go to that shopping mall!
I don't know what else to say.... that was really good.
Do you have any stories posted in the Library if so what are they?
Dear Lady Amanda,
Your story of Rebecca is fabulous.
Thank you very much for the work you put into it. Really appreciated as i can never finish Chp.1 when i try to write. xxx
Having re-read this bit so far, I think I just might have to finish it - it's so much more fun to write than the other non-erotic fic I've been writing for a fanfic group.
Stay tuned - I will finish it this time, after I try it out on Sylvie. I think she'd look cute in a schoolgirl's outfit :)
Amanda
Promises, promises!
A agree...enough of the waiting. Post your story...with pictures to help us imagine the story...
*shifty eyes*
LadyAmanda,
If this has been completed and posted, please so advise.
If you're still working on it, here are a few ideas:
One: a little more descriptive attention to what these cute girls are wearing. It helps flesh things out in one's imagination. What color skirts, plaid, how long? Knee socks? Shoes? And how about lingerie. Give them pretty, delicate underwear. Wouldn't a girl want to wear a slip/halfslip underneath a wool uniform skirt? Say, something satiny, with a bit of lace or scalloping on the edge? Make the girls pretty for us...
Two: If Rebecca gets hot with the right spanking abuse, show her what it feels like to get punished without the reward of sexual excitement! She strikes me as a bit too-big-for-her-britches, where rough sex is just an adventure she can enjoy, as long as she 's in control.
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Let's see what happens when she doesn't have control!
Three: Use Gillian as an absolute contrast to Rebecca. She allows Rebecca to entice her into rough sex play, but she (Gillian) is very innocent and virginal, but suggestable. She :rolleyes: finds that as exotic and daring as Rebecca's romps may have seen to have been from a distance, once she gets involved--and can't back out!!--she finds herself ensared in pain, degradation, humiliation, violation, and actual rape.
Both girls wind up wiser, much sadder, and definitely the worse for wear. :rolleyes:
all I can say is...wow...
Ds
Please continue!!!! This is amazing.
i just read your shoplifter story its amazing, if you ever get to finish it plz let me knowQuote:
Originally Posted by Powerone
After reading this whole thread, I really do wish to read more.
*searches around for LadyAmanda* Where'd ya go? :(