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05-16-2004
moro

help us with script

Dear Sirs,
I think it is most right place for this asking.We with my slut wife have decided to make home porno movie (non for commercial use). I am ready to be the director and the actor, and she an actress. We want to involve one more actor.
A problem is that we don't want to make simply usual home porno with one bed stage. We want to shoot a film with humiliation,elements of moral violence,degradations and BDSM. For this purpose we not have only one think-professionally written script. Use some stories from this super site)) is impossible because no ine story not 100% good for shooting and also I'm not professional in this and script help me a lot.
We will be very grateful if someone can help us with the script.
Our opportunities:
-The wife really beautiful whore 32 year with very good figure and large brests
-We will find the second actor from message bords most likely he will not be the professional
-Elements of violence and various perversions are acceptable
-For us possible to shoot this movie in the street, in hotel, in cafe and on a nature
Basis of a plot we would to see poker game and wife as a bet in the end she should become real dirty whore completely dependent on this cunt and mans cock. For us very important humiliation and gradual degradation.
We thankful in advance and as the award to the author of the script,we can send the some photos from future home blockbuster)))

Best regards
Moro
05-17-2004
le forgeron

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Originally Posted by moro

Dear Sirs,

Bad start! You're forgetting more than half of the population...

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Originally Posted by moro

I think it is most right place for this asking.We with my slut wife have decided to make home porno movie (non for commercial use). I am ready to be the director and the actor, and she an actress. We want to involve one more actor.

Ok, that's fine, but beware, having more than one role can be difficult. Who is at the camera ?

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Originally Posted by moro

Our opportunities:
-The wife really beautiful whore 32 year with very good figure and large brests

And that shouldn't care too much.

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Originally Posted by moro

-We will find the second actor from message bords most likely he will not be the professional

So, the scenario should be enjoyable for him/her.

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Originally Posted by moro

-Elements of violence and various perversions are acceptable
-For us possible to shoot this movie in the street, in hotel, in cafe and on a nature
Basis of a plot we would to see poker game and wife as a bet in the end she should become real dirty whore completely dependent on this cunt and mans cock. For us very important humiliation and gradual degradation.

And so, you have a 'poker party' magically transforming the wife ?

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Originally Posted by moro

We thankful in advance and as the award to the author of the script,we can send the some photos from future home blockbuster)))

COME ON, this was supposed to be home-porno... not blockbuster!

If you want to stick to the poker party, it might be wiser to have two players, each with a separate wife... or at least the player without wife should have something significant as counter-balance.
The bet might be various performance from winner (or winner's wife) upon the looser's wife... here would pop up the unspeak humiliation.

I would certainly prefer something like a 3 player poker: Wife, A and B.
The bet would start like a classical strip-poker, but would spice up with plugs, special outfit, performance and so on. Having a nice big scale displayed to provide money to repay the debt. (so, In need of 100, let's suck everybody... Oh, you need more, sorry but the easy 100 is gone, at best you could now get your ankle spread (by a solid bar) for ... ) Get the idea ?
Shooting should alternate between sex and card display (you might want to either shoot subjectively from either Wife or A point of view, or provide a better game view to the spectator).

For punishment scale, I've always found the BSDM-checklist to be a source of idea.

Of course, as it's a movie, the card should not be really shuffled... unless you are ready to be fair and surprised by the card.
05-18-2004
moro

answer for Le forgeron

Dear Le forgeron,

I'll try to answer by points:
Sirs I mean Sir and Madam for sure)))
Cameraman can be me or another guy.
I say about how looks my wife because probably it's halp for humilition part of scenario.
And so, you have a 'poker party' magically transforming the wife ? -My answer - Yes
3 players I think it's possible me and A and B
With other your ideas I totaly agree.But it's only draft draf.Can you help us with scenario?

Best regards
Moro
05-20-2004
Camelot

[QUOTE=le forgeron]

For punishment scale, I've always found the BSDM-checklist to be a source of idea.

Where is the BDSM-checklist?
05-20-2004
Camelot

Sorry about that, I haven't yet gotten to grips with this posting and quoting thing.

What I meant to do was quote from Le Forgeron's post where he says:
'For punishment scale, I've always found the BSDM-checklist to be a source of idea.'

And ask where that checklist is.

Regards,

Camelot
05-21-2004
le forgeron

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Originally Posted by Camelot

'For punishment scale, I've always found the BSDM-checklist to be a source of idea.'

And ask where that checklist is.

First, my apologies for the typo, it's BDSM-checklist.
Next, a few links, if you're unable to ask your favorite search engine:

http://www.sexuality.org/l/bdsm/checklst.html

http://ms.ha.md.us/~tammad/over21/bo...checklist.html

http://www.bdsm-education.com/checklist.html

http://www.twoheartsonesoul.com/checklist.html

http://www.sdldungeon.com/checklist.html

I won't enter any dispute about rights, nor about which one you should prefer (there is some slight variations from one another, and I prefer mine in french... I even once performed an aggregation of four english variants to just make mine... did not keep it online, alas)
05-21-2004
Camelot

Thank you for that, most helpful.

I am impressed by the way you managed to quoted from my post, I couldn't do it from yours as you no doubt noticed above.

Thanks

Camelot
05-26-2004
SirRetribution

Experience

Dear Moro:

To shoot a movie, you first need a story line. Then it has to be written to text of individual speech, replys, and where do you from for where ever you want to go. If this is non commerical, then I presume that you will be shooting with video cam, not a 35,16, or 8mm cam. If you shoot with the non video cam. You'll need at least three cams. Two stationaryand one to roam.

Your begining of the story is conceptually good. A lot can take place from there. Locations may be key for you in making your better than average home movie.

Regards SR
06-02-2004
leo9

Keep your script simple

There's nothing wrong with the poker game idea as a starter, but both to keep down the number of actors, and to go straight into the action (essential if this is explicitly porn), it should have already happened. All you need is a few lines of dialogue between the top and bottom to establish why she is here and why she is submitting to him, and away you go.

As for the wife's transformation from victim to willing slave-slut, I won't debate whether it is realistic (though I could give you some real cases), but it's a favourite BDSM scenario. I certainly love it :)