Electric Blue

Sitting on Red Velvet Couch
With an innocent kneeling at my feet
Your soft hair caresses my skin
It sends shivers up my spine
As your mouth moves to my lush garden
And XTC fills my body and soul
A flash of electric blue creates a sonic boom in my Soul
My love is not all pleasure; It is exquisite Pain
That fills you up again and again

My heart bleeds in an eternal moment frozen in time
Like a perfect diamond forever catching the light of my sisters
My sisters are the notes of an harmonious song that has no beginning and no end
Like the crashing waves of the sea
The Sea that feeds and sustains me

Nice

I like it Mick, which is most unusual for me since I'm not a great fan of poetry. Well done, how about an encore!

a deep n emotional poem... touching....it's a good poem Mick *hugsss

Hi Mickie - thought it was good the first time I read it - so glad you decided to share it.
I think it's very moving. Please keep writing and posting.

loved it the first, i notices that ye did some twaeking that 'as made it flow all the better. lass, ye fair take mi breath away.

I love it