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When I read this story I was immediately struck by the quality of the writing, which is well above the usual standard on this site. The concise style, with short sentences and effective vocabulary, is well suited to short stories. The dialogue is also laid out clearly, and correctly; something that many writers fail to do.
Recommended as an example to novice writers, particularly those attempting short stories.
I have to agree, her style is talented, conveys the idea and feelings well.
Compared to many stories I have read online, she excells.
My first thought after completing her latest chapter was, "her teachers would be proud, not only did she learn, she retained."
well done sublte
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Very well written I may of went overboard with the review's I wrote. I hope that other readers will discover Subtle Storys! I know they wont be sorry.
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