Conversation Between Michael247 and Sudere

Michael,

Re: 'Cheerleader's Mistake'- Thank you for you critique, I really enjoyed reading your thoughts and ideas.

This story is the product of what I call a 'spur of the moment' urge. I get an idea and feel the need to just get it down on paper. Clean-up and expansion beyond the minimal is rarely undertaken, since the urge usually abates shortly afterwards. Also, one of my biggest problems when I write is that I tend to get bogged down in too much detail, so with these stories I try to stay out of my own way.

I do have another story on the board that you may have read- 'House-bound', and you may find this more fully fleshed out with dialogue and a bit more detail. Please read it and let me know if it is a better story.

Again, thanks for the feedback.

V/R,
Sudere